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PKMN Gale of Darkness - C2Chapter 2"Professor Krane
is gone?" Jovi asked as tears began to form in her eyes."I'm afraid so, Jovi," Lily spoke as she sighed, placing her hand on her chest. "Cipher took him
""What are we going to do, Lily?" one of the scientists asked. "We're not done with the Purify Chamber yet, and Professor Krane is the only one who can put the finishing touches on it
"Lily looked down and closed her eyes. She hoped an idea would come to her, one she could use to fix the situation, but she just couldn't think of anything. The doors to the room then flew open and a young girl came rushing into the room. "Lily, I just got a message from the Parts Shop in Gateon Port. They have the machine part we ordered from them.""Thank you, Angie," Lily spoke and the girl left the room. She sighed and looked down when an idea struck her. "You know what? No, we're not going to be like this. Professor Krane didn't put this much work into the Purify Chamber just to have it go to waste like th
PBE - The EndThe second day of Sinnoh Con begins and Emily and Kiai make their way around, seeing some of the different acts until the Eevee Club Tournament. Emily and Michelle make their way through the ranks, meeting one another in the final round. There the two do battle, and Emily barely manages to make it out on top. Emily is given an Eevee and a shard of Ice Rock as her prize. Emily and Kiai then make their way to the Poketopia Tournament where Mysterial finds he is missing half the items he needs to run the tournament, forcing people to wait once again before the tournament can begin.Finally, the tournament starts and Emily and Kiai begin to rise the ranks of the tournament. However, when Emily is sent into the Fortune Battle round of the tournament, she fails to win. Kiai, however, continues to climb the ranks, and in the final round he battles against Alex, winning a grand victory over him. He then accepts the challenge from Mysterial, and the two do battle. Kiai barely manages to win it,
PKMN Gale of Darkness - C1Chapter 1"Welcome everyone to another exciting battle here in the Orre Colosseum!" the announcer spoke into the microphone in front of him. The crowds sitting in the chairs all around the rather large coliseum were cheering loudly. "Let's get this match under way! On the far left side of the stadium we have Todd from the Pokemon HQ Lab!" The crowd cheered as a young boy, no more than twelve, stepped into the stadium. He had his dark red hair spiked up above his head, along with a bandanna around his forehead. His outfit consisted of a simple black long-sleeve shirt with a yellow sleeveless shirt over it along with a pair of blue jeans and black sneakers while he also had a belt around his waist that had a small pouch on the left side."In the other side of the stadium today we have one of your all time favorites. Everyone welcome Emily from Pyrite Town!" The crowds went wild as a teenage girl, no older then fifteen, stepped into the stadium on the other side. She had long brown hair t